Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Far away

Pardon me Mr Coleridge,
but I am a man on business from Porlock,
I dearly hope I wasn’t interrupting anything,
but I was sent to tell you,
that you have some matters of mundane importance
to take care of,
it will only take a few minutes of your time,
then you can get back to whatever it is,
that you were doing for the night.
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32 comments:

  1. psykeMarch 22, 2011 at 3:04 PM

    That was pretty deep. You've earned a follower.

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  2. PvtCarlinMarch 22, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    Ohh, I like this! Thanks mate!

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  3. BenjiMarch 22, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    That was touching, i liked it i may show some friends this thanks +follow

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  4. noonkaffeMarch 22, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Matters of mundane importance... hmm.

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  5. BlogginsMarch 22, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    Nicely written

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  6. AnonymousMarch 22, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    Love it. It's well composed too. :)

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  7. Angry China ManMarch 22, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    haha cool, you're not plagiarizing are you?

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  8. 1HipHopBlogMarch 22, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    Love the blog, 1+ follower.

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  9. OFCHokkaidoMarch 22, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    Wow awesome poetry. I have some i wrote myself. =o

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  10. Micah GossMarch 22, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    I like it. I used to write in a very similar style, I stopped in high school because people began misconstruing what I was writing and it began to affect my personal life. +1 follower though, keep it up.

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  11. drumtalkerMarch 22, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    I'm digging it.

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  12. Wheeler EscavoMarch 22, 2011 at 10:40 PM

    Nice to see another poet on here, I've only posted one but I plan to keep it up, good stuff =]

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  13. asldkasdMarch 22, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    Nice, I like poems. I'll follow you :P

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  14. OscarMarch 23, 2011 at 4:42 AM

    Keep up the good work.

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  15. Phillip J FryMarch 23, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    Nice work. very unique. Following

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  16. AdminMarch 23, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    God I love contemporary poetry.
    Maybe get rid of all the commas though?

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  17. GeelloMarch 23, 2011 at 5:27 PM

    Nice one ! followd :)

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  18. russkofkof441March 23, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    why not? good stuff man^^

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  19. AnonymousMarch 23, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Like :)
    *following*

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  20. UnknownMarch 23, 2011 at 6:09 PM

    Nice poetry.

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  21. Francisco PelayoMarch 23, 2011 at 9:41 PM

    well, this is deep

    following and reading another poems!

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  22. OscarMarch 24, 2011 at 3:23 AM

    Lovely poem.

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  23. CandleintheDarkMarch 24, 2011 at 6:00 PM

    I love this. Good poetry!

    I'll be following :D

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  24. ElucidMarch 24, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    Following - I like your poetry.

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  25. KamranMarch 24, 2011 at 6:50 PM

    cool- Following

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  26. CindyMarch 24, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    Nice poem, I look forward to seeing your new poetry :)

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  27. -|[gowR]|-March 24, 2011 at 8:39 PM

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  28. Every DayMarch 24, 2011 at 8:52 PM

    lovely.

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  29. Butcher BradleyMarch 24, 2011 at 8:54 PM

    I like your posts :)

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  30. srysbusinessMarch 24, 2011 at 9:36 PM

    deep shit bro. following

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  31. Liter.Of.ColaMarch 25, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    Very nicely done, i want more. +Following

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  32. psykeMarch 26, 2011 at 12:41 AM

    I've read everything that you've posted in here. GIVE US MORE ALREADY!

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