Tuesday, March 22, 2011

Far away

Pardon me Mr Coleridge,
but I am a man on business from Porlock,
I dearly hope I wasn’t interrupting anything,
but I was sent to tell you,
that you have some matters of mundane importance
to take care of,
it will only take a few minutes of your time,
then you can get back to whatever it is,
that you were doing for the night.

32 comments:

  1. That was pretty deep. You've earned a follower.

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  2. Ohh, I like this! Thanks mate!

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  3. That was touching, i liked it i may show some friends this thanks +follow

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  4. Matters of mundane importance... hmm.

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  5. Love it. It's well composed too. :)

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  6. haha cool, you're not plagiarizing are you?

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  7. Wow awesome poetry. I have some i wrote myself. =o

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  8. I like it. I used to write in a very similar style, I stopped in high school because people began misconstruing what I was writing and it began to affect my personal life. +1 follower though, keep it up.

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  9. Nice to see another poet on here, I've only posted one but I plan to keep it up, good stuff =]

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  10. Nice, I like poems. I'll follow you :P

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  11. Nice work. very unique. Following

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  12. God I love contemporary poetry.
    Maybe get rid of all the commas though?

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  13. well, this is deep

    following and reading another poems!

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  14. I love this. Good poetry!

    I'll be following :D

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  15. Following - I like your poetry.

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  16. Nice poem, I look forward to seeing your new poetry :)

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  18. Very nicely done, i want more. +Following

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  19. I've read everything that you've posted in here. GIVE US MORE ALREADY!

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